๐Ÿšจ ์ด ์š”์ฒญ์€ ๋ด‡(Bot) ๋˜๋Š” ํฌ๋กค๋Ÿฌ๋กœ ํŒ๋‹จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ๊นŒ๋‹ค๋กœ์šด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋‚˜์˜ค๋ฉด, ํ•ต์‹ฌ
์ฃผ์–ด์™€ ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋จผ์ € ์ฐพ๊ณ  ๋‚˜๋จธ์ง€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

๋ถ„์„ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹œํ—˜ ๋‹น์ผ ์ปจ๋””์…˜์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•œ
๊ณต๋ถ€๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ฐ€๋ฒผ์šด ๋ณต์Šต์ด ๋” ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

ํ† ์ต ์‹œํ—˜์—์„œ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋ ค๋ฉด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ‘ผ
ํ›„ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋” ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€์„ ๋“ค์ด์„ธ์š”

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

์ž์‹ ์˜ ์•ฝ์ ์„ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ทจ์•ฝํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ง‘์ค‘์ ์œผ๋กœ
๋ณด์™„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์‹œํ—˜์—์„œ ๊ณ ๋“์ ์„

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

๋ฐ›์œผ๋ ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ํšจ์œจ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐฐ๋ถ„ํ•˜๊ณ ,
๋น ๋ฅธ ๋ฌธ์ œํ’€์ด ์Šคํ‚ฌ์„ ์ตํ˜€์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์‹œํ—˜์ด
๋๋‚œ ํ›„ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋ถ„์„ํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ฐ™์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜์ง€

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

์•Š๋„๋ก ๋Œ€๋น„ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹œํ—˜ ๋‹น์ผ์—๋Š” ๊ฐ€๋ฒผ์šด ๋ณต์Šต๋งŒ ํ•˜๊ณ ,
์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ‘ธ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ”ผํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์ •ํ™•ํ•œ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

๋‹ต์„ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„  ์ง€๋ฌธ์˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๊ณ ,
๊ทผ๊ฑฐ๋ฅผ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ
๋ฐฉ์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋งˆํ‚น์„ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ ,

ํ† ์ต ์ ์ˆ˜ ์ฒดํฌ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

๋น ์ง„ ๊ณผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š”์ง€ ์ฒดํฌํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹ค์ „ ๊ฐ๊ฐ์„ ์ตํžˆ๋ ค๋ฉด
์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ชจ์˜๊ณ ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ํ’€๊ณ , ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ์•ˆ๋ฐฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„
ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค


ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #126

๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ํ๋ฆ„ ํŒŒ์•… ๋ฌธ์ œ
The team completed the project ahead of schedule. Now, we will analyze the results.
     Q: What will happen next?
     A. Analyze the results
     B. Start a new project
     C. Celebrate the success
     D. Review the teamโ€™s performance
     
์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ด์ œ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋ถ„์„ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์–ธ๊ธ‰๋˜์—ˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ •๋ณด ํŒŒ์•… ๋ฌธ์ œ
Message: The conference has been moved to Friday at 2 p.m.
     Q: When is the conference?
     A. Friday at 2 p.m.
     B. Tomorrow at 3 p.m.
     C. Next Monday at 10 a.m.
     D. Thursday at 2 p.m.
     
๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€์—์„œ ํšŒ์˜๊ฐ€ ๊ธˆ์š”์ผ ์˜คํ›„ 2์‹œ๋กœ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์–ธ๊ธ‰๋˜์—ˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์กฐ๊ฑด๋ฌธ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ
If the company meets its targets, it will reward the employees with bonuses.
     Q: Which type of sentence is this?
     A. Condition
     B. Statement
     C. Question
     D. Request
     
์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํšŒ์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ํ™•์ธ
The meeting will begin at 10 AM sharp tomorrow.
      Q: What time will the meeting begin?
      A. 9 AM
      B. 10 AM
      C. 11 AM
      D. 12 PM
     
ํšŒ์˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์ผ ์˜ค์ „ 10์‹œ์— ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์‹œ์ž‘๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋‹ต์€ B์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ผ์น˜/๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The report indicates that the sales have increased. Is this statement true?
      A. Yes
      B. No
     
๋งค์ถœ์ด ์ฆ๊ฐ€ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์–ธ๊ธ‰๋œ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ด ์ง„์ˆ ์€ ๋งž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ฃผ์ œ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ
The article discusses the importance of cybersecurity in modern businesses.
     Q: What is the main topic of the article?
     A. Cybersecurity
     B. Business growth
     C. Employee satisfaction
     D. Marketing strategy
     
๊ธ€์€ ํ˜„๋Œ€ ๊ธฐ์—…์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์ด๋ฒ„ ๋ณด์•ˆ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ‘œ ํ˜•์‹ ์ •๋ณด ์ฐพ๊ธฐ
Q: According to the chart, which department has the highest number of employees?
     A. Marketing
     B. Research and Development
     C. Sales
     D. Human Resources
     
์ฐจํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋ฉด ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ถ€์„œ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋งŽ์€ ์ง์›์„ ๋ณด์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ต์€ D์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์–ด๋ฒ• ๋ฌธ์ œ
The team will have finished the report by the end of the week.
     Q: Which of the following is correct?
     A. The team has finished
     B. The team will have finished
     C. The team will finishing
     D. The team finished
     
"will have finished"๊ฐ€ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜์™„๋ฃŒ ์‹œ์ œ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ B์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ƒํ™ฉ ๋ถ„์„ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The project deadline is approaching, but the team has not completed all tasks.
     Q: What is the manager likely to do?
     A. Extend the deadline
     B. Cancel the project
     C. Reduce the scope of the project
     D. Ignore the issue
     
๋งค๋‹ˆ์ €๋Š” ๊ธฐํ•œ์„ ์—ฐ์žฅํ•  ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์ด ๋†’์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ฐœ์š” ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The article discusses various ways to improve communication within teams.
     Q: What does the article cover?
     A. Ways to improve team communication
     B. Team building activities
     C. Employee performance reviews
     D. Management strategies
     
์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋Š” ํŒ€ ๋‚ด ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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